Monday, February 2, 2015

Poetry Anthology Poem 1


I’m busy
I’m really busy with everything
I can’t even find time for homework after school
I’m performing in the school musical Guys and Dolls
I’m also in Winter Percussion
Both require rehearsal
It’s really tiring
I get less freetime
Sometimes, I have to stay up all night
I have to go directly after school to the rehearsals
There’s even rehearsals on Saturday
I had to be at almost every rehearsal
I’m managing to hold on
This is tiring me out
I’m really busy with this
I know this to be true

3 comments:

  1. This is really good I can really connect to the whole busy theme and not having enough time to do anything good job

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  2. I like how you made it personal and how it shows that you have little time and that you need a break

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  3. I like the way you expressed your business in this poem. Good job Ryan.

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