Basketball
Learning how to shoot was the easy part
Having to go against someone wasn’t so easy
Knowing it could get me hurt wasn’t a thought
Until i got caught putting ice on my wrist by my mom
The feeling you get when you make a shot
Which gives you thought like your first time riding a bike
The excitement and happiness is unforgettable
Don’t get me started when going to a game
It’s like you are watching from your tv but you can see your favorite players
I enjoy everything about basketball
The buzzer beater can make you feel like you getting your first car
Knowing the team your rooting for makes the shot to win the game is a jumpy feeling
OKC OKC OKC is the team you can see winning a championship game
They may have their wins and loses but know they can’t bring you down
Their fun to watch and you can learn a lot
I like how you used figurative language and detail.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is beautiful. The comparisons you used made me smile and the words were great!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you expresses how much you loved basketball.
ReplyDeleteIts cool that you shared something that meant a lot about you. I wish the image was a bit more creative however.
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