Love has many effects
Never can be messed with
Never can be destroyed
But it can found in between two happy people
It shines beautifully in one’s heart
Like a ray of sunshine in a dark rainforest
Cannot be removed by anyone who opposes it
Lasts forever in one’s heart with it making the world seem brighter
Makes you want to run around the world enjoying its company
It can make you smile, but it can also make you frown
It can give you life, or it can leave you poisoned
It can be difficult to understand
and it can be looked at from different perspectives
and it can be founded in different ways
Can thrive forever if it’s in the right hands
Gay or straight, young or old, love is a beautiful feeling for people
Good rhythm in the poem and great descriptions. Enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteI like how you show that love is not always the mushy sweetness people feel, and how it can hurt you as well. You take the poem into two different perspectives, and that makes us question if we do really love or not.
ReplyDeleteIt's a really warm poem. Nice: "(love) Never can be destroyed". Good analysis of what love is like.
ReplyDeleteNice poem I enjoyed how it made you think. It also effectively used a metaphor and repeated common words.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you provided contrast to the different effects of love, and your central message is true.
ReplyDeleteReally great work. I can definitely see the well thought you put into it.
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