A Beating Heart
I have felt the butterflies dance,
I have stumbled with my words,
I have blushed at your smile,
but I’ve always wondered where
the line between crushing on
someone and falling in love goes.
I wonder what it’s like
to love someone with
all you’ve got, to no
longer see straight,
and to ache for someone
despite their mistakes.
I wonder what it’s like
to fall for someone,
even for their flaws,
their aggressive moods
and their mysterious hearts.
I wonder what it’s like to
love someone, to allow
someone to have your
heart, to have someone
make your darkest days
seem just a little bit bright.
They say you accept the love
you think you deserve, and I
wonder what love that belongs
to me, and which I accept
and maybe deserve.

This is so true omg and well I could connect to the whole crushing and love situation, good job Odie
ReplyDeleteI really like the risk you took by sharing such a deep poem on a topic such as love. I can relate to everything you said. You did a great job with repetition that proved your points. Great job.
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