Thursday, May 7, 2015

Act 2, Scene 1: Hiding in the Orchard

Prompt F (from Romeo's point of view)
As I hear Mercutio and Benvolio mocking me and my obsession with love, I am not fazed. Their continuous stream of jokes is frustrating, yet I am too consumed with thinking about her. I am risking a lot for her, by hiding in the garden of my mortal enemies' home. I ignore Mercutio and Benvolio because I need to focus on finding a way to talk to Juliet. I cannot leave the home without seeing her. My heart is racing and I know I cannot stay here forever.

4 comments:

  1. Wow this is really impressive! Reading this allowed me to have a different perspective of Romeo, and I thought you portrayed him really well.

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  2. The way that you analyzed and wrote Romeo was very spot on! It shows that you really paid attention while reading

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  3. This is very well written. Why do you think he was able to move on from Roseline so quickly?

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  4. I like the way that you went into Romeo's point of view. I think that you captured what he was thinking and what he was feeling very well.

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